Hello everyone!!
Today we worked with our K'nex constructions.
The teams are:
- Omega 8 ( Vance, Erik, Viktor, Bryce, Kat, Me, Antonia, Iva)
- K'nex Squad ( Emilie, Laura, Cip, Reza, Julia, Alix, Noam, Fabi)
The credits are:
- Omega 8 ( 4 credits)
- K'nex Squad ( 4credits)
This was mainly all we did in class, good luck for the rest of the project.
Gio, Scribe Post
Gio - I like your use of colors and pictures for this post, however it was a day late and you have not introduced the project itself, which is what you needed to do. Thanks for listing the teams, but anyone who reads this will not understand what we are doing in class. You could have had pictures of people building as well. Finally, your labels are incomplete. In the future follow the directions more carefully please.
ReplyDeleteGio, I liked how you used your colors, it was well created! However, you might want to talk more about the science that happened during class. You could write about machines we built like the roller coaster ramp, playground station, etc...
ReplyDeleteHello GIo,
ReplyDeleteI like the pictures very much and nice use of colors but i have a suggestion for you. You should write a bit more and say what buildings your team has constructed or what is the main goal of this project. Except that, everything is very good!
I think you did a good job with making the blog look nice. Also, I think it was great that you reminded us how many credits we have so far. I think that you could explain more about what part of the project we were working on that day like gears, levers and so on. Overall, great job!
ReplyDeleteHi Gio,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your scribe post and I liked how you made it colorful and how you put the group names and members. Maybe you could have explained what we do when we build the simple machines, and you could have maybe post the link to the directions to the K'nex directions. All in all, I think your post was helpful!
I like your use of colored text and how spaced-out everything was, I also think that your grammar has improved a lot.But I think that you should have explained some of the homework for that night.
ReplyDeleteHey Gio:
ReplyDeleteI think that this scribe post was great and I also believe that you have put a lot of effort into it. You also did a great job getting the pictures of K-Nex.It was also great that you put up the groups and the different members of the different groups. One thing you could have improved was that you could have gone more into depth. Overall great job.
Hi Gio.
ReplyDeleteI think the colors and layout was nice and easy to read, not too cramped and bright as some other posts. The pictures were interesting. One thing you could have done was to explain the actual project and what we were doing in it. You also might have written a little more about the day, such as which team was in the lead or what type of simple machine we were using, although, admittedly, there wasn't too much to describe. Thanks for listening!